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They burn . . .
Can you hear it?
Crackling from the flames.

They drown . . .
Can you see it?
Bubbles rising from the depths.

They fall . . .
Can you feel it?
Ground shaking as they strike.

They cry . . .
Can you taste it?
Bitter, salty tears.

They die . . .
Can you smell it?
Stench of rotting flesh.

They've gone . . .
Did you notice?
All forgotten in the past.
©2004-2009 ~Mirintala
:iconmirintala:

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From 4/3/02

"So bored, can't you see?
Writing morbid poetry."

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:iconradiopooh:
the catagory of morbid poetry inspirded me to think about writing .. 'ode to lippo suction' - another path to death

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:community: Come on people now, smile on your brother, everybody get together and love one another, right now
do not - repeat - do not click on this link - [link]
:iconpenitio:
Not too morbid... details to be really morbid.

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World comes first, you second, your cat third. ~ The order of which superheroes save things.
:iconphoenixrisen:
I like the rhythm in this a lot.
:iconmirintala:
Merci.

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Mirintala
Head of White Umbrella
Part of the ~ Umbrella-Corporation
I'm not an artist, I've never claimed to be.
I'm a demonic angel, though it's something you can't see.
:iconmirintala:
:P

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Mirintala
Head of White Umbrella
Part of the ~ Umbrella-Corporation
I'm not an artist, I've never claimed to be.
I'm a demonic angel, though it's something you can't see.
:iconshoga:
Wow~ I get images of Black Rose~ *.* I like this~ It's not all that morbid. ^^; Then again, this is coming from me . . . *cough* I like how fluid it is~ Smooth, like milk chocolate--bitter like espresso beans~ :dance:

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"The Savage Garden . . .It's just a phrase I used to use for the Earth, in the old times when I didn't believe in anything, when I believed the only laws were aesthetic laws. . . Before I knew we knew more of nothing, and nothing more."-Lestat

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:iconzacha:
The rythm is very nice.
To keep the same "system" the whole way through.
It's not morbid IMO, only a little pessimistic...

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"Everything I have written may be wrong."
:iconmirintala:
The morbid came more from the description for this, which was actually part of it. I know it's not particularily morbid, but that's what it was called.

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Mirintala
Head of White Umbrella
Part of the ~ Umbrella-Corporation
I'm not an artist, I've never claimed to be.
I'm a demonic angel, though it's something you can't see.
:iconmirintala:
Mmmmm . . .chocolate . . . hehe, thanks. Black Rose?

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Mirintala
Head of White Umbrella
Part of the ~ Umbrella-Corporation
I'm not an artist, I've never claimed to be.
I'm a demonic angel, though it's something you can't see.

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January 27, 2004
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